March 16th, 2014

3/16/2014

This will be our class blog. Each week you will be expected to read and respond to what I have posted in complete sentences. You will also have to respond to at least one other person post. So you will be making two comments each week. Don't forget this will be part of your grade.

Write a story about what happened Below. Be sure to include where this van came from and where it was going. My suggestion: if bananas were the only thing left to eat in the world, how would you feel? What would you do?

Write at least 5 Sentences!

61 Comments

seif

3/16/2014 01:08:23 am

once upon a time there was a monkey called mr.grumpy pants. he was so hungry . so he meets a pirate so he gave him a ship to cross the island . then he took a lot of bananas so he wanted to go back home . so he went back to the pirate ship and crossed the island then he meets a taxi to go through.

yahia

3/16/2014 02:17:24 am

I like the name of the monkey. But the story has nothing to do with the picture

Maya

3/16/2014 03:55:34 am

I like it seif it is about pirates and I like and I like when you said he took a taxi

yoyo

3/21/2014 08:09:05 pm

where did mr. grumpy pants find the bananas

juny

3/16/2014 01:40:07 am

once upon a time there was a monkey who wanted bananas.He went around the world to look for bananas.He loves bananas.The monkey went every were to find bananas but he could not.And suddenly the monkey found a big van that had a million bananas.

bobo yahia

3/16/2014 02:20:28 am

hahahaha very nice story but which country around the world,did he find the banannas.

Maya

3/16/2014 03:50:34 am

I like yours juny. It sounds cool

Maya

3/16/2014 03:51:25 am

Can you tell us more about the story

yahia bobo

3/16/2014 03:59:21 am

your right

Maya

3/16/2014 03:57:02 am

I think bobo is right its nice but the story doesn't match with the picture.

bobo yahia

3/16/2014 03:57:32 am

once upon a time there was a little monkey named bobo whose life was peaceful and quiet. but there was one problem. he lived in a very bad country called blackspot.it was full of trash, broken houses and dusty streets.so one time is uncle frank was so hungry that he ate up the best, sweetest, and most scrumptious bananas in the history of the world. so bobo took permission from his father and mother to go on search for bananas. so he went to the farm. they were all out of bananas. so he went to the pet store in disguise as a human. but they caught him.so bobo sat on the nearest bench and started crying because he couldn't find any banannas.so he had an idea, his idea was to go to the zoo. so he snuk into the zoo.so he went into the work area of the zoo and grabbed the keys from the desk with his tail. he opened the door that said animal food. he found one million bananas he couldn't believe his eyes the shimmering light of the astonishing bananas were making him tremble with excitement. but he couldn't carry all these bananas home. so he had an amazing idea. his idea was to search for the key to free the gorillas from the cage. so he searched and searched and finally found that key. he went outside the door and set the gorillas free. they helped him carry all the bananas home. but before that happened he spotted a vw bus and told then to put it in the back seat.so bobo waved goodbye. and drove home. but there was a problem. he didn't know how to drive but he didn't care so he went on.The time he arrived home bobos bus was broken. Then he put the bananas in the house and called his family and they were so excited especially uncle frank. Bobo told uncle Frank that he will not eat any bananas because he ate all the bananas. So they lived hapily bananas bobos ever after.

Dana

3/16/2014 04:17:00 am

Bobo i your story

Little Sister

3/17/2014 05:06:09 am

Bobo I'm to lazy to read your story it's to long!

yoyo

3/21/2014 07:56:50 pm

bobo you got a nice paragraph but i think you could add more

bobo

3/23/2014 04:42:42 am

excuse me
this is enough

Dana

3/16/2014 04:11:43 am

Once upon a time there was a little monkey called dodo she loved bananas so she wished that she would have 1,000 buses of bananas her friend so they ate all of the bananas and dodo was wondering if she could have some more.But dodo didn't want to be so fat so she got one more banana to eat and she finally dodo stayed thin and she kept and jumping up and down for some more bananas.Dodo went to Germany and new york and New Zealand and he found 100 buses so he took one bus of bananas to eat so she wondered if she can get some more bananas to eat but in the end of the day she said that is enough .Dodo lived happily ever after. I wish you like it.

dana

3/16/2014 04:20:15 am

Sorry i did a little mistake

Maya

3/16/2014 05:05:35 am

Sorry me to I even made a mistake for In a comment

bobo

3/17/2014 01:37:26 am

i want more coments

Maya

3/16/2014 05:20:30 am

Once upon a time there was a monkey called Jumbo. He lived with his family. On day his mom was screaming because she didn't find any bananas in their garden and the whole family was so upset and hungry.so Jumbo decided to go to bring bananas for his family from Hawaii. He kept on searching for the bananas all over Hawaii.then he found a big land full of bananas trees .so he filled his van with thousands of bananas then he went back home.all his family was so happy and they kept eating bananas until their tummies were full.

farida

3/16/2014 08:45:36 pm

were do they live on a farm or in the city ?

Maya

3/17/2014 06:06:21 am

Farida if you want to know were he live he live in jungle but he goes to Hawaii a lot of time

Little Sister

3/17/2014 05:03:13 am

Haha nice Maya i like the part when you said his mom screamed

Maya

3/17/2014 06:09:06 am

Thanks sis

Tia

3/23/2014 08:21:56 pm

it is very funny maya epeasially when the mom screams!

Maya

3/16/2014 05:21:23 am

Make a comment below

seif

3/16/2014 05:52:58 am

why maya tell us

Little Sister

3/18/2014 03:08:42 am

where?

SeIf

3/16/2014 05:54:56 am

once upon a time

Little Sister

3/17/2014 01:01:25 am

Once upon a time then what happend seif.Plus you already did a
story.

Ezz Eldin

3/16/2014 06:30:29 am

once upon a time there was three monkeys that liked bananas.
one day the three of them went to the jungle and took bananas.so the monkeys had so much he did not no how to carry all of the bananas. so the three monkeys sat in a tree. suddenly one of them got an idea.He said if we have a van we can take all of the bananas.the other monkey said that is a good idea.But where will we find a van.we can borrow it from some body. But people don't under
stand us.farmers do. I don't think this is a good idea.so the monkeys
went but the farmer trapped the monkeys.the monkey tried to get out
and the monkeys tried to explain the farmer understood. so he gave
him the van and the monkey drove the van and went home. the monkeys couldn't what.the monkeys did a party.the monkeys invited the
farmer too. the monkeys danced with the farmer.the monkeys ate
with the farmer.the farmer ate lots of bananas he couldn't eat any more.

bobo is smart

3/19/2014 04:24:19 am

nice ezz

farida

3/16/2014 08:42:08 pm

once upon a time there lived a monkey that loved bananas one day he was sad there was no bananas ? so he cried all day long until he found a bus of bananas so the next day he came and ate a banana .the day he was so hungry he went for 2 and the little monkey was so so hungry what would he do no one new at all.
the other day he ate 2 bananas . then the third day he ate three bananas. then he ate all the bananas in the truck and slept he did not wake up day one two or three what was he gonna do so he started driving the bus one day and became a driver. then a little monkey wanted a banana so she got one. she was so happy she stared jumping up and down and slept.the little girl gave a little hug . that's the end .

farida

3/16/2014 08:42:57 pm

leave me a reply

Little Sister

3/17/2014 12:14:56 am

Nice Farida,but you have mistakes!

Maya

3/17/2014 02:38:33 am

Farida I like the story but what is the name of the monkey

farida

3/23/2014 08:23:00 pm

cool story

Tia

3/23/2014 08:23:23 pm

puncuation wrong, story nice.

Tia

3/17/2014 12:38:12 am

Once upon a time there was a monkey called Tt.believe it or not, that was her real name. her nickname was tutti frutti. that is because she loves fruits. she loved every fruit except bananas. everyone thought she was weird because she didn't like bananas. one day tutti frutti and her family were taking a walk, when all of a sudden, she saw a van full of bananas. there was a sign next to it that "everyone put there bananas here. we are taking away bananas from the world."Her whole family started to panic. they loved bananas. tutti frutti started a myth that bananas make you dumb. of course, it wasn't true. it was just a joke. but her family believed her. so they started acting dumb. so now they thought tutti frutti was the smartest. she actually was the smartest. she knew how to keep bananas. the answer is simple. you make a secret place underground and hide and eat your bananas their. but she didn't say that out loud. she didnt like bananas, why would she want to save them? tts family was dumb. but they were smart enough to make tt like bananas so she can save them. so one day they hid a banana in her daily apple. she said it was better than any apple she ever ate. so then they told her there was a banana in it. then she told them her plan.and her family lived happily ever after.and tt was also the smartest monkey in the world.

THE END

Little sister

3/19/2014 04:42:46 am

Nice

Tia

3/17/2014 12:45:00 am

leave comments, only nice.

Little Sister

3/17/2014 12:58:47 am

Your nickname and Tanias nickname

Little Sister

3/17/2014 12:56:49 am

Once upon a time there was a monkey called Mr.Shorty pie!He was fat like an elephant he was always hungry.So one day he found a van full of bananas.So he decided that every day he will eat five bananas from the van.So the first day he ate five bananas,second day he ate five bananas,third day he ate five bananas and so on.One day he didn't find the van so he looked for it every where and he couldn't find it.So he was sad that he didn't find the van.One day he found a monkey standing in front of the van that he used to eat bananas from.Mr.Shorty pie went to the other monkey and told him,hey this is my van of bananas.The other monkey slapped him.So Mr.Shorty Pie said,oh no you dien't and then they started to beat each other up.Mr.Shorty Pie ended up with a purple eye,a broken hand,and his face got punched.It really hurt him.He stayed in bed for 5 months and didn't get out of bed.The other monkey didn't got punched he didn't brake his hand,and he didn't have a purple eye.I hope you like it Mr.Ahmed and all student!Plz reply student and especially Mr.Ahmed!

Little Sister

3/24/2014 06:39:13 pm

Can anybody comment on my story!Plz

Maya

3/17/2014 02:39:47 am

Go Tia go the story is nice

Maya

3/17/2014 02:41:11 am

Can any one reply for my story

Little Sister

3/17/2014 05:04:26 am

I did

Little Sister

3/17/2014 05:08:56 am

Anybody answer me

Littlr Sister

3/17/2014 05:09:38 am

Plz

Suhani

3/19/2014 05:04:10 am

Once upon a time there was a monkey called Foodey. He was very fond of food.His most favourite food was Banana.One day Foodey was very hungry.So he order for 100 Kg Bananas.The store by mistake send him 1,000 kg Bananas. Foody got shocked to see so much banana. Then he got an Idea. He called all his friends for a surprise party. They all got together and had fun party.

Suhani

3/19/2014 05:06:23 am

Does any one got a called for a party.

Little Sister

3/20/2014 04:30:33 pm

i don't understand what that means

belo belal

3/19/2014 06:11:57 am

Once upon a time there was a monkey called bleela. He did not do anyting except bananas. He loved bananas very much. Then people started to eat alot until bananas were the only thing left in the world to eat. Then bleela decided to take all the bananas left in the world to his house. It was to hard to get it to his home. So he built a van and put all the bananas in it. Then he went home. He lived happily ever after.

belo belal

3/19/2014 06:28:40 am

Is there is any comments about my story.

belo

3/19/2014 06:33:16 am

I like the part of the pirates seif.

belal

3/19/2014 06:41:08 am

Sorry I did a little mistake in my story every one.

belal

3/19/2014 06:44:22 am

Nice story ezz and yehia

yoyo

3/21/2014 08:06:28 pm

once upon a time there was a boy called yoyo he didnt have bananas his family was very hungry he go jumping and jumping looking for bananas he founded a bananas tree there was a farmer he asked him could i have a banana he told him yes you couldbut there was a problem there was million of bananas and he is tierd from jumpingso he asked the farmer could i barow this van he told yes you could he told him thank you when he go to his family he was the hero and then they lived happily after

yoyo

3/21/2014 08:11:15 pm

sorry i forgot about the full stops

Little Sister

3/24/2014 06:37:03 pm

you said he founded.That doesn't make any sence.

Zain

4/15/2015 05:27:05 am

The Crazy Bananas Car.
Once upon a time a farmer took all the bananas from his farm to sell them. He was not driving good and was driving so so fast. Suddenly the car crashed into a tree and the bananas fell from the Car. The people and the monkeys came and took the bananas from the Car. The farmer was very sad and went back home without money.

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